After some critiques and rework and some color, here is version number 2. I do feel it is a bit comic inspired and will try a few color variations to see how the feel changes and what works better.
I created this character design for Dominance War 3. I chose to do a character in the stalker catagory. Emanon is an Undead Assassin who will wield the magic of Darkness to stealthfully finish her enemies. This is the first pass on her concept. I plan to change out her weapons and come up with a weapon that is interwined with her arm.